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Scene Feedback for other groups

Lily Mia Connor 1. What has this group done well? Projecting their voices 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene? Nothing much, I understood what was going on 3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot. Very energetic 4. Describe the relationship between the characters. Tight but argumentative 5. What else could this group have done to improve? Be less jokeful Logan Patrick Loki 1. What has this group done well? Good positioning 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene? Nothing, I understand what is about to happen 3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot. It should be very important and  4. Describe the relationship between the characters. Father son relationship, someone is about to kill the son 5. What else could this group have done to improve? Less smiling because there is a sword on Logan’s throat, voices should project more Ryan Lauren 1. What has this group done well? They showed emotion...

Essay Pre-Writing (Noah Chi / Daylin Hunn / Logan Shvartsman)

Noah Chi / Daylin Hunn / Logan Shvartsman Paragraph 1: The man is happy because it has been a while since the man has seen the real world and he wonders what it will be like when he enters reality once again. Paragraph 2: He regrets the things that he did that put him in jail but will have to live with that for the rest of his life. Paragraph 3: He imagines what life is like without him, his family, his friends, and whoever has taken part in his life. Paragraph 4: Life in the world is good again and they all await for him to be released. Paragraph 5: Conclusion

Picture Paragraph Edits

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Picture Original Paragraphs (by Logan) Setting             The setting takes place on a staircase in the middle of nowhere. The entire background is blue including the sky, the staircase, and the water which perfectly reflects everything. There are two big fluffy white clouds in the sky and a man dressed in all black on the staircase. The man is wearing a tall top hat, a cane, a black coat, black pants, and black shoes. He is on the staircase and at the top of the staircase is a black door which is also reflected by the water. The air is chilly and the is a small breeze. Everything smells sterile and unnatural as if something is off and it is so quiet you could hear a pin drop. The only noise being made is the clicking of the man’s shoes transcending the stairs. Plot The man in black lived on an island all by himself, he never felt lonely and was happy living on the island. You may wonder why he never fel...

Picture Paragraphs

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Noah Chi Ms. Guarino IB Lit and Perf 01/09/20 Picture (tilted 90º can't fix) Setting Description There is not that much information to describe this picture. There is a white flower, possibly a magnolia, surrounded by a group of red flowers, probably roses. The white flower does not seem to be in the right place, since it is so different from the rest. It is the only white color in the picture, compared to the red petals and green stems from the others. The white flower also looks like is has not bloomed yet, but when it does it will change the picture entirely and would definitely have a deeper image, as if it had a meaning to stand out. If the white flower were not there, this picture would most likely be a lot more meaningless than it really is. Plot/Story The gardener had a job to plant a batch of red roses on his back lawn to sell in the spring. While he was doing this, the wind had somehow carried a magnolia flower seed into the group of rose seeds, but...

In Class Assignment 01/07/20

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Verbs: Skied Celebrated Ate Slept Struggled Worked Hiked Played Bought Watched Sentences with the verbs: I skied down the mountain in a breeze. I celebrated New Years with my family. I ate chicken wings everyday for a week.  I barely slept every night since there were entertaining things to do.  I struggled to put on my ski boots due to sleep deprivation and exhaustion. I worked on homework that I had over break. I hiked up a mountain with my grandparents on ice with spikes attached to our shoes. I played video games with my friends when I got back because it had been a while since.  I bought a new baseball glove because the one I have doesn't really fit me anymore.  I watched Jumanji 2 with my family on my dad's birthday.  I can't tilt it idk why In this picture, it shows a white flower standing among the other red flowers, possibly roses, to show its uniqueness compared to the rest. An assumption of what happened before...