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Lily Mia Connor
1. What has this group done well?
Projecting their voices
2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene?
Nothing much, I understood what was going on
3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot.
Very energetic
4. Describe the relationship between the characters.
Tight but argumentative
5. What else could this group have done to improve?
Be less jokeful


Logan Patrick Loki
1. What has this group done well?
Good positioning
2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene?
Nothing, I understand what is about to happen
3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot.
It should be very important and 
4. Describe the relationship between the characters.
Father son relationship, someone is about to kill the son
5. What else could this group have done to improve?
Less smiling because there is a sword on Logan’s throat, voices should project more
Ryan Lauren
1. What has this group done well?
They showed emotion a lot better than other groups
2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene?
What exactly is going on during the scene
3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot.
Very stressed and panicking in the moment
4. Describe the relationship between the characters.
Lauren seemed like she knew what was going on and was calling Ryan out for it
5. What else could this group have done to improve?
They could have made what was going on more clear
Tony Amy
1. What has this group done well?
Everything, the props too
2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene?
Nothing really
3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot.
Very nervous about what they were doing but they knew they had to do it.
4. Describe the relationship between the characters.
They seemed like people who had to do the job together, possibly they were friend in real life too.
5. What else could this group have done to improve?

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